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line of sight was unobstructed
our eyes flicker
communicating through
years of practice
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your really coming along on this poetry thing man. I could feel the imagery and emotion in that one. I loved the part about buying a beautiful girl (stranger?) a flower while drunk! Haha classic...this is one of my favorites, great job.
Another very good piece full of keen observation and deep emotion Nik
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WOW. Everyone who reads this is now a richer person. will be adding it to my favorites ~! best care, goldy