Friday, March 23, 2012

All Around Comments

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All around the tree
As little kids they played,
All the world was fairyland;
Dreams were not delayed.
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Lawrence Hiung
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Walterrean Salley 10 June 2012

Lawrence, these certainly are days of longing. Times that one hopes would never end. Paints a beautiful picture of peace, love, harmony and faith. I really enjoyed it. 10

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Lawrence H 24 March 2012

This poem was about going around on anything I can think of. How I described what I saw and felt.

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Lawrence H 24 March 2012

This poem was about confusion about all around about anything we see and heard.

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Lawrence Hiung

Lawrence Hiung

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