Tuesday, January 24, 2006

All Apologies Comments

Rating: 3.2

By writing you today
I have found a way
To express something I need
To share with you indeed
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Shaun Edmonds
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Duncan Wyllie 29 January 2006

Say it as you feel it. Another great job.Love Duncan

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Christina Moore 24 January 2006

Right now, you are one of the people I love! I've been having this ongoing fight with the most important person in my life and you just took the words from my mouth - Thank you so much. I try to apologize, but sometimes it's just impossible. Your poem reminded me that no matter the trouble, they're worth it. I think the words could be expressed a little better, they sometimes seem as if they were just chosen becuase they rhyme? that could be just me. But still a great poem. ~CM

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