Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, March 21, 2010

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Why have we extended so much or overstretched
Why do we feel frustrated and our dreams wrecked?
Have we grown so much obsessive and materialistic?
Do we not care about real world and remain static?
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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John Knight 22 March 2010

Hi Hasmukh - A very interesting and philosophic poem. V 1 Highlights the fact that 21st C Man is very materialistic and also very dissatisfied with what he has. V 2 The Holy Scriptures say 'Godliness with contentment is great gain'. V 3 We need to consider the situation of the AVERAGE MAN in the World. He has so litle compared with what we have in the UK. A comparison woulld soon make us 'Count our Blessings' for what we take for granted. V 4 A soft life erodes our resisitance and 'The moral fibre is lost'. V 5 In order to have less stress and a degree of mental peace we need to be less of the 'Now Generation' and take a long - term view. V 6 Ambition is a good thing - but it needs to be in persective. V 7 'Rejoice and participate in the thing in the natural way'. We need to take some risk - but we can't fly - remember Icarus. V 8 What great advice and what a great ending 'Doing what comes naturally'. Joy - self fulfillment - satisfaction - no pain - no rejection - So let it be.. Thanks for sharing. yours in poetry - JOHN.

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jimmy zepp 22 March 2010

At first, God said; Let it be light...and there was light...Genesis... And so is the basis of all your questions, for us as mortals, and that's how it must be...So let it be, and may God help us... A masterpiece of true reality... 10+++

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Emma Adamyan 22 March 2010

let me express it this way... u could put in rhyme sth that in general is hard to say

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Lady Grace 21 March 2010

good write...nicely done..we must have honesty in all our answers so that we will not be misunderstood...but are u sure that the qustions are asked in a right manner? hope so....

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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