Flittering eyes
Lay shut
For silence
While necks
...
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though less jumbling of words but selected brilliantly and each line connected beautifully. Cheers :)
thanks for sharing a so sweet poem and words..really ts so impressive one and meaningful too..lovely idea and well expressed...hmm so great
Well, I enjoyed reading it. Well written, flowing to the end, Sad and Sort of Creepy, Edgar Alan Poe a bit.
brava! ! ! ! .....makes you appreciate the beauty in sadness itself....i have written a short poem on similar topic bt i hv contradictory view on it....its called 'Sliced wrists, Hanging necks'....chk it out if u want to.... :)
This is really good! Keep writing, your poems are awesome.