Tuesday, May 4, 2010

All Along This Is Where I Belong Comments

Rating: 3.9

Flittering eyes
Lay shut
For silence
While necks
...
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Seairra Kyger
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Taylor Niemi 05 May 2010

This is really good! Keep writing, your poems are awesome.

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i love u babe (tandi) 05 May 2010

its sooooo beautiful in an awsome way hahaha love it :)

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Mahanish Jung Thapa 04 May 2010

though less jumbling of words but selected brilliantly and each line connected beautifully. Cheers :)

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oober good :) truly unique :) loved it!

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Afzal Shauq 04 May 2010

thanks for sharing a so sweet poem and words..really ts so impressive one and meaningful too..lovely idea and well expressed...hmm so great

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Ingrid Mott 04 May 2010

Well, I enjoyed reading it. Well written, flowing to the end, Sad and Sort of Creepy, Edgar Alan Poe a bit.

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Ankur Natu 04 May 2010

brava! ! ! ! .....makes you appreciate the beauty in sadness itself....i have written a short poem on similar topic bt i hv contradictory view on it....its called 'Sliced wrists, Hanging necks'....chk it out if u want to.... :)

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Seairra Kyger

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