All Alone In This World Comments

when my brother left our home...... the same kind of feelings came to my mind...coz i didn't have many friends......so i can kinda relate to your feelings here.....at that time we tend to think standing alone will help......its good u have the courage to stand alone......but then as gordan said standing shoulder to shoulder with others is far better..... good work....nicely written.....

hey how lonely thoughts you have...all i can say you need a ffriend and who does care.whom you will never ask why do you care? .a friend who can make you feel how pretty yhe life is with a friend and your all lonely thoughts will convert in to sweet thoughts, , really written nice with very simple words/....plus expressed well...keep writing

I agree with Gordon..I hope you too..nice write

Standing alone is fine - but standing shoulder to shoulder with others is far better - an interesting read and it flows quite well, keep on writing - 9