All Alone! ! ! Comments

beautiful, sad, raw emotion - SG

very 'finely' writtn with vry minute details. i lv d way u present it. i undrstand...it do happns smetyms...specially at d tym f exams! !

wow sounds like me i always feels alown

Full of emotion, so sad. Loneliness in itself is a killer. Pray for every void to be filled..with love! ; D

Awwww...bless, i will be your friend, such a sad poem, very good,

Hmm... its a nice poem, if we ignore the technical errors(i sit 'beside' my living room) and the monotony of having the same idea to expressed in every paragraph. But beyond that it is something can acutely connect to when loneliness sets in my life... it captures the mood of being unwanted very well.

well well it was a really emotional poem.....but remember the creator is always with u......you have lost the track of life.......call him he will hear you, help yourself he will help you twice.......but only you need to call him.......god given life to enjoy and he knew that if he send all people together they will feel loneness if he takes someone a way one day......so alone he send and alone with him you live........call him he will hear you...................i wont say im here for u because i believe we are not alone...thanks for sharing your feelings

sincere and intense...great expression and each line explain so well...u are talented! but too much dark color u used to think...but it will lead u what areal life is...if nobody want to be ur friend i do because your life is not to be ended but to learn..nice!

wow this a very deep poem.... i like it very much thank you for sharing :)

nice peom keep up the good work

OK well I liked the ending. I like the way you talk about death. I think we should respect death as we respect life. Some of the ryming was too forced and the beginning was a bit choppy. If it was mine I would spend more time on it and make it perfect. It was good.

o my wow dis is very good its deeo and this we can apply to our lives

Wow! Its an awesome poem! I loved it

Well written expressed the loneliness in a very beautiful way.... liked it very much...

Aah please don’t say “Before Killing” It breaks my heart… There are so many things to be done…. So many songs to be sung… So many verses yet to be…. So many lives to be touched…. So many hands to be reached….

Aah please don’t say “Before Killing” It breaks my heart… There are so many things to be done…. So many songs to be sung… So many verses yet to be…. So many lives to be touched…. So many hands to be reached….

Aah please don’t say “Before Killing” It breaks my heart… There are so many things to be done…. So many songs to be sung… So many verses yet to be…. So many lives to be touched…. So many hands to be reached….

i reallllllllllly love this poem..keep writing....ur going to be a inspiration on a lot of ppl

XP i like it: D nice flow....-tay marie in and out XB

this is deep poem and...i can feel what you are saying it touchy..