All Alone Comments

i hope it came from your creativity.............. God bless you! ! ! ! ! !

Please look at the other half, the positive one and enjoy in your loneliness. CP

Please look at the other half, the positive one and enjoy in your loneliness. CP

gud read but loliess is much more than it it is much more pain which has to be thr in ur words

wonderful composition on loneliness... lovely to read..10 up.

fantasticpoem..took me to that empty home while the darkness it's gown and the silence of his dawn... very well described..10++++

got a bit confused, looked like a childhood fear of being lonely being penned but then suddenly turned to some kind of hatred and gloominess, not sweet, but yeah the way the idea of loneliness taken with the ghosts, was distinct

hmmm so sweet, rich and perfect poem...really enjoyed it and as whole your poetry is heart feeling one and i like your ideas and the way you do poems.. hope my poems also touch your heart...10 +++++

enjoy the loneliness....... we all are alone in life............

great work! People usually have a tendency to exaggerate a lot while writing on such topics. But you have put it in the best way possible! hats off to you! these are my favourite lines walking a line.....deflating faster

wow.... it just makes u feel so sorry for the character thats all alone, if its actually you then i feel even more sorry but hope this changes, but good thing about experiencing tough times in life is that u can make an absaloutly beautiful poem out of it just like this one. love the ryhming/rhyming! lol :)

nice written and good work.lonelyness sucks but feels sometimes great... keep writing

being alone is so so so much terrible. i have felt this thing fear which u expressed u well in the poem excellent work ;)