All Alone Comments

such sadness from this poem

OH! ...THE LAST LINE IS BEAUTIFUL! ! ! ....AND THE WAY YOU HAVE WRITTEN THIS POEM IS GOOD TOO... IT IS A SAD TRUTH THAT SOME PEOPLE IN THIS WORLD FORGET THE PEOPLE THAT BROUGHT THEM TO THE EARTH! PLEASE TRY TO MAKE YOU RHYMING SCHEME BETTER....THAT WOULD CAUSE MORE LIFE TO THIS POEM... KEEP WRITING...AND ENJOY IT...

Verna, the last line is wonderful. So incredibly sad too. I can identify with your poem as I have five grandchildren. Cannot bear the thought of sitting there all alone. Brave and well written, especially the repeated sentence gives your poem authority. Well done!

Yes, you certainly have captured the plight of many a mother today. But honey, may I make a suggestion? Please, don’t shout. All caps have the implication of screaming. Just turn your caps lock off, please. It makes for more enjoyable reading. Your poems are too good to be spoiled. Then go to my site and read ‘Many a Mother is Forgotten Today’. Now I must go on to read more of yours. Good job! Adeline

A nice and lovely poem. Love it.

a 10 for this fine poetic descriptions. thanks

Perhaps she needs to realize that alone doesn't necessarily have to mean...lonely. When a person truly enjoys their own company...we become much less dependant on others for our satisfaction in life. Hugs, Dee

you have captured the plight of senior citizen-loneliness, regrets, pain and agony.- so well in a direct and simple way.10