I am all alone
So cold, and as white as a bone
Betrayed, and broken
From words not spoken
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This poem is crowded with lonliness. Yet it flows it flows with an isolated rhythm that make it powerful. Good write.
very impressive write with good use of rhymes which are my favs. and nice floating stanzas which make readers easy to understand...in short very good write keep it up with the good write sir....thanks 10
very nice peom...whats kentucky like, i prefer sheffield maself! ! ? ? your poem brings a new meanin to lonliness, well done! !
a write frank and honest...but you won't be that alone in the days to come, Neil...presentaion good 10
I like it alot man! I feel this way all the time. I wish I had a love of my own. But then I think of the heartbreak that WILL come shortly afterwards. NICE ONE. >.<
very nice, really very nice, so simple words, and ur poem actually means sth, very easy to understand and keep up the good work.
fith poem i wrote really good.......