Sunday, June 10, 2007

All About Their Business Comments

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Here, down by the river, there are amazing things to see,
Kingfishers, Otters, Moorhens and even the Water Flea.
All parading together, in Mother Nature's open spaces,
Living out their separate lives, going through their paces.
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Ernestine Northover
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C.R. Clark 18 April 2008

You see so much in nature that could, so easily, be overlooked by those who are less observant. Your descriptions are wonderfully written. I do love this poem. Thank you for sharing. Richard

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Andrew Blakemore 07 March 2008

Blissful poem, at one with nature, there really is nothing better. You've captured the moment so well. Andrew x

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Mother Nature should pen you into her will, my dear...Your Golden Pen, once again shines effulgently with rhyme, rhythm & vivid imagework...Awesome work, Poetess E.! FjR

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Sid John Gardner. 20 June 2007

An extraordinary poem Ernestine depicting nature's gifts and delights on the river.Again masterfully crafted.Toad Of Toad Hall Calling? ....... Sid John xx

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Scarlett Treat 12 June 2007

Somehow, I feel as though I have just returned from a wonderful camping trip, because you remind me of the peace and life found there in nature's place. What a joy it is to be there, and to find that peace....either there or here, in your lovely poem.

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How utterly lovely... amazing things to read in this piece too. You bring it to life with a powerful pen. t x

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Davidia Kartina 10 June 2007

did you RIGHT this at the river? because it LEFT a great impression of actually being there, so much pictures it was like an art galler.y Love, DKDAVIDIAKARTINA **********please read and review my poems please *************************

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