Monday, July 20, 2009

All About Me Comments

Rating: 4.7

I Don't want to talk about it
Please let what I say, be
And if you moan, I shan't be pleased
Cos this is me, being me
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Vanessa Hughes
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Craig Moses Uche 24 May 2023

Good poem, do check out my poem Letters and The Poet

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Bri Edwards 03 March 2017

:) again....................................

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Pen Anthony 20 December 2015

Honorable poet this is a beauty

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Hannington Mumo 30 November 2015

A good burglary into another person's thinking of you. Simply unputdownable!

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Leslie Sharp 07 February 2015

It was good being able to write your emotions out is medicine for the soul

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Charity Nduhiu 13 January 2015

Very true and well explained. Keep up

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Roseann Shawiak 22 January 2014

Well put. There are too many exes like you've written about. They think they're the only one to be listened to. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Adeline Foster 10 June 2013

I too am glad of the explanation, I've know one or two who could fit the mold. Read - Who Am I - Adeline

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Ruth Walters 15 January 2013

................some are all about themselves and others are all about the giving of themselves but all giving and no taking leads to irritation.....well that's how I'd feel....

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Bri Edwards 20 November 2012

thank goodness you left us a note about why you wrote this. i'm not as confused now. i laughed aloud upon reaching the end the second time i read it.

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Yewande Adedokun 06 June 2012

i knew it was about a broken heart all along.

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Heather Wilson 08 April 2012

Well done for stating your point, a great poem, hope your ex read it.

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Indira Babbellapati 30 March 2012

ex always trying to be one-up!

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Romeo Della Valle 17 March 2012

And Beauty and the true feelings have been clearly revealed through this powerful and well crafted write! You felt at this particular moment of your life like I felt when I wrote my poem titled: Who Am I? Written with honesty like yours! Thank you for sharing my dear friend! 10+++ God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Virginia Pecho Gely 20 December 2011

The words are as simple as life can be. I feel the freedom and liberty and the full self-confidence of the poet. A carefree attitude and at the same time loving life as it comes....I hope you can read my 2 poems submitted recently. Thanks for sharing. Virginia

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Sally Plumb Plumb 08 December 2011

Love the comfortable last four lines.

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Rachel Butler 25 October 2011

'Now, go and count your blessings Come back and we'll have tea' RAB

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Ahmed Khaled 02 September 2011

modernity could be to a far extent amazing and fascinating if it is well_composedly blended with philosophy, this is the matter which honestly was supposed to be attempted in a hard way of structure to get a higher resolution of the final poetic picture of this attractive poem.thanks vanessa.i'm happy with you yours: .ph.d: .a.khaled

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Sharron Stephenson 02 September 2011

i can truely understand where you are going with this poem i have the sam feelings sometimes

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Ramesh Rai 01 September 2011

Dear Vanessa, Really you have posted a nice poem. words are though very simple but it is impressive. i have also posted some poems. if possible comment, i m waiting. very sincerely ramesh rai

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