Droning words, unfortunately read
This tender, fog-draped morning,
Has done nothing for my appreciation
Of the world of the 'Genie'...
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You pen your vitriol poetically and yet offer the reader much more than a clever critique - a fascinating story about a fascinating subject from long ago in fairyland and beyond. 'This tender fog-draped morning' is a beautiful beginning to a magnificent piece of writing. love, Allie xxxx
You seem to possess the courage & direct honesty to pursue your unique vision which is rather refreshing, and alas few & far between on this site. An enchanting observational piece with subtle interior rhyme, Elysabeth. Well before you alluded to the materialistic wish grantee(s) , I began to consider, now if only a bona fide altruistic mortal could attain three wishes to perform humanitarian deeds? Greg
This, too, is very evocative, and thought provoking. Words seem to flow effortlessly from your (dare i say?) magic fingers. Nice work.
This took alot of thought, is informative, interesting and ever so well put together. You are really good...I hope you know that..........marci.m.d.
A snatch of genius on the loose from the mind of EF to ensorcell us wouldhavebeens and wannabees - and yes, it does that to great effect! And also, at the same time, a magical weaving of the real and the fantastic to wake us from the world of careless thought. A very clever poetic blend bespeaking a sharp and discriminating mind. First rate in all departments. xx jim
Here is a quote that has been attributed to Max Reger and George Bernard Shaw on the subject of criticism, ''I am sitting in the smallest room of my house. Your critique is in front of me. Shortly it will be behind me.'