Monday, April 18, 2016

All Aboard! Comments

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My bag is packed and I'm ready to go,
And as I look around one last time,
I can't find one damn thing that I'll miss,
Of happiness, this was no paradigm
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Lora Colon
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Darwin Henry Beuning 09 August 2020

Lora, Very nice! To My Poem List.

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Bri Edwards 26 July 2016

where is brian johnston? peddling his wares far and wide, or just asleep under a haystack in South Dakota? bri :)

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Bri Edwards 21 May 2016

To MyPoemList. :)

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Bri Edwards 21 May 2016

I think a paradigm and a nickel equals two bits. ====================================== On Lora Colon's Poem: All Aboard! ....... (my 'echo') If you had left while but a (happy) youth, We would have missed you; it is the truth. Who would have stepped into your size 6 shoes? Who else, with mournful verse, would us amuse? ? Now do for us (before you go) just one last favor. Give Bri Edwards poems for 'showcase' fans to savor. Bri :) ========================= Now to finish reading yours. ___________ Extinguishing Love's Flames I've had a few love flames extinguished in my life, Including those I had for numbers 1 & 2 & 3 wife. Perhaps those flames were never quite big enough, So eventually it didn't take so very much to snuff..... them out! =========== so there! ! :))

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

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