All A Dream Comments

This expectant waiting for your beloved, though long can be fun! As long as there is hope still lingering, this hiatus won't be tedious! May your patient wait be rewarded! Enjoyed the poem!

love da simile in da 2nd line.it creates a vivid image connecting 2 da 1st line. Beautiful poem.

this is a wonderfully picturesque poem, a lovely read! ! !

Dreams are the stuff of which life is made. Well done my friend.

hey, this one interests me... well it's good!