Sunday, May 4, 2008
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Rating: ★3.2
The soft sound of a river
Makes One’s skin quiver
The depth of the ocean
Is as deep as One’s devotion
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Aaminah Ottley
04 May 2008
The way you write about war and inner conflict is captivating. I just love it. You should consider a short story or novel.
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9/9/2025 9:01:15 PM # 1.0.0
The writing here left something to be desired. The rhymes were not exactly the best and the transitions were not easily read or understood in the context of the previous one. I was generous on this one but it still falls short. GW62