Saturday, March 29, 2008

Alive Today Comments

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i dreamed i killed myself today
i swallowed the pills to kill the pain
but something happened: something strange
it seems the pain didn't go away
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Sharm S 29 March 2008

Love the way the poem ends. Good flow...I can connect coz I had similar dreams :)

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