Monday, March 19, 2007

Alive Again Comments

Rating: 5.0

Through those hazel eyes
You told me something
I’ve never heard before.
You showed me that love was real.
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jess schwarcz
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Vidyadhar Durgekar 10 June 2008

Good to read...I enjoyed it..............

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Michael Fischer 03 April 2007

Nicely done. I like how you repeated the line 'How can I ever thank you? ' It makes your theme in the poem that much more effective! -Michael

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