Friday, September 15, 2006

Alive. Comments

Rating: 2.8

I won't take back what i already gave,
and if my heart beat once it'll till it dies.
This love i felt i'll take to my grave,
it will increase daily though your heart denys.
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Eman Awad
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Ratnakar Mandlik 04 January 2016

A beautifully penned passionate love poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 January 2016

Hear my heart and seek for the works of peace. Nice work.

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M Asim Nehal 04 January 2016

If you asked me any thing i'll, that i knew what keeps my stars apart. And finally i knew why i'm alive, believe me i love you so much.......Superb 10+++

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Cool Soubai 02 August 2008

In this poem love is burning like fire and makes the heart alive and stronger.Nice work keep writing E man i like love poems

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