Woke up in a morgue today
Dont even know the date
Whats with all this noise?
Why does the pain scream out loud?
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Real SPOOKY poem, some have woken up at the morgue in real life.
A macabre theme, but optimistic on the whole methinks. This is ballsy, graphic and feisty. The images challenge the reader. The poem is strong and tightly paced. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
If a definate them could be worked out at the beginning this would be a corker of a poem...rewrite a theme....good work regards uavaniceday