Saturday, June 25, 2005

Alive Comments

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I look around and stare
at box i am imprisoned
from within...
its dark
...
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Sally Nesmith
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Lawrence S. Pertillar 25 June 2005

OH! yes...('a' shed') ? ? ? ...I shed...perhaps? It's your work, either way! I love this ALIVE

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 25 June 2005

BEAUTIFUL! You got 'talent'! Suggestion: 'I look around and stare... at a box i am imprisioned from within... it's dark it's cold...' I just thought I'd add my 2cents to a very wonderful work! Thanks, Sally

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Sally Nesmith

Sally Nesmith

Savannah Georgia
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