Alive Comments

I rather like this Kyle. I think the low mark ranking is probably merely evil on the part of Those Who Can. Who hasn't wondered what death may feel like... and your personal take on it is largely well-written. (Check your inbox though) .

This is very good Kyle. Concise with vivid imagery. That final stanza is something we must all remember to try and do. We must keep remembering the feeling. Excellent line. Well done, welcome to PH, Tai