Sunday, March 23, 2008

Alive Comments

Rating: 4.5

The ocean rushes into your head
as you believe with all the truth you have left
and your mind tainting away into your emptiness, where know one is home
fading into the darkness till you feel alone
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DELETED NOW 23 April 2008

sometimes I believe that heaven is just a name for ur prize for being alive.... then I think u go to a place w/ no air and u pass out and dream forever happiness of course unless u r a bad person....good persons think good thoughts and bad think bad thoughts and when people dream, their thoughts are invovled(my theory) .

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 22 April 2008

Hello poet Janice. This is another great poem, enjoyed reading. LC

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poem whore 23 March 2008

wow nothing like anything i have read

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