Tuesday, September 18, 2007

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In April, when spray begins to spring
Lilacs and daffodils can be found
Pulsing up from the dead ground
And birds long gone return to sing
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Forrest Hainline
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Tan Pratonix 26 November 2018

Well done! Smooth and easy read. The rhyme pattern ABBA is rare, and adds a special nuance of tender love to this already lovely poem.

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Ron Flowers 16 January 2009

A very pleasant read. Ron

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~ Jon London ~ 02 May 2008

A beautifully composed write, your unconditional love shines through as bright as the sun... lovely message throughout. all the very best Jon

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