When vibrant faces go pale
That's when we meld to the dark landscape
When faith topples and crumbles
That's when we secret away in vain
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Hope never fails even if we lose its essence sometimes. We have to be able to move with the tides wherever it takes us in life. Hope will always come out on top. Nice write.
Here we must became more precise and less abstract. The poem has potential though. Smiles! G.