Saturday, March 10, 2007

Alienated From The Sublime Comments

Rating: 5.0

I don’t want
To let this time slip by
Like a mountain slide
Or let you evaporate
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Uriah Hamilton
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Sandra Fowler 13 March 2007

Superb writing. Your word portrait of a lady in a yellow dress becomes a symbol of eternal sping in the mind of the reader. To be alienated from her would be like being alienated from sunlight itself. Sweet sadness lingers long after the last line is read. Kind wishes, Sandra

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Declan McHenry 10 March 2007

A sweet request indeed Uriah.

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