Alienage Comments

Lovely imagery and brilliant piece of writing...i really liked it...

Dear Vipins, Thank you very much for the read and review. well, i would love to engage myself still close with my sense towards some of your verses. kindly send me a list of the most haunting ones so that i might well be able to concentrate reading. Your support would be of great relevance. Keep penning, You are a Bard, blessed be your voyage to the virgin wilderness of imaginations and passions.

It was remarked for Mir Taqi Mir's felicity of expression that his reader might think that he can write with the same ease with which Mir writes, but when he tries, gets failed...the ease with which you have composed this beautiful poem reminded me of that felicity...it is a beautiful poem: Before you cogitate to forsake me; May I step away from your nest to fly Alone in this wide and peaceful sky Holding my dreams hiding inside me, Until my life-tree sheds all its foliage Or I lose this lonely life of alienage.

beautiful interconnection nature-human being-enjoyed

You cannot afford to be alone or withdraw. Loneliness could lead to bad consequences. Read my poem Lonliness. It is good to flock together no matter the odds

A beautiful poignant poem with lovely imagery, brilliant write! !

I agree with Valsa George. Anyway it's a beautiful write. God bless you with caring and loving friends and family

I agree with Valsa George. Anyway it's a beautiful write. God bless you with loving and caring friend and family

good very nice. nice one im glad i read u

nice one im glad i read u

No-one is alienated, we are each one little piece of a gigantic jig-saw puzzle, and one piece missing would make it incomplete. Well penned.

Why do you alienate yourself from everyone? Look into yourself and count the innumerable blessings, received and look out into the wide world and see people deprived in more than one way! We miss you Vipins!

Interesting write. Nice flow to it. Outstanding poem! ! !

We need a short period of time to recuperate and get healed and if it is a life long process, something is not right! a powerful poem on loneliness!

This is another explosion poem from you vipins, i liked it a lot..the state of mind really bring me something to look about your way viewing life..but as i told you, dont be weak yet you will go astray and hard to turn back, just grab in your hand a fighter spirit and here you ready to go! _Soul

Sometimes we feel terribly alone in this wide world. Sometimes we do feel alienated But if we find in our heart a small spark of gratitude for one of our fellow humans this spark may grow into a fire brightening the lives of many giving us a great sense of purpose and lots of peace of mind Another good and thought provoking poem, Vipins Well done.

another brilliant write from a brilliant writer, incredible piece indeed thank you for sharing sir love payal

a good work...........well written