Wednesday, June 25, 2008

Alien Attraction Comments

Rating: 5.0

A magnetic pull
Like the positive to my negative
An irresistible attraction
Like moth to a flame
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Dereck Gibbs
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 27 June 2009

Very catchy title and wonderful imagery. Last clinching line uplifts the poem to a new meaning of alien attraction. Keep up, Dereck! Best Wishes Naseer

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