Friday, October 14, 2005

Alice In La La Land Comments

Rating: 4.8

Ding dong the witch is dead
The wicked witch is dead.
Somebody filled her brains with lead
and now the wicked witch is dead.
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Bridgid Patrick
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Original Unknown Girl 11 April 2008

A clever tale, I enjoyed reading this, having found it in the forum. HG: -) xx

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Greenwolfe 1962 14 February 2008

The most important aspect of this, is the originality of the concept. Originality is on of the first things we lose as we get older. Bridgid is still young enough to retain it and talented enough to make use of it. I'll read on. Greenwolfe 1962

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Chuck Audette 10 May 2007

ding dong the witch is dead no need to sing the blues for it seems you've now a pair of brand-new Gucci shoes! fun one, liked it! - chuck

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Danny Reynolds 30 March 2006

Pure class... (All the King's horses and all the King's men..had scrambled egg for dinner again!) Danny

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Sylvia Spencer 24 February 2006

This is just up my street/ the Nutter Street, I belong to a family of Nutters and this poem belongs to me. brilliant cheers Sylvie

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Scarborough Gypsy 19 February 2006

Well I reckon a lot of drugs were involved, when they wrote Alice In Wonderland. Probably the same ones they used for The Magic Roundabout! The poem is great. I love the way you write. Love Gyp's

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Scarlett Treat 02 February 2006

This whole poem is so 'Alice In Wonderlandish, ' and 'Through the Looking Glass.' Topsey Turvey, upside down world and very funny. Linda

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Ivy Christou 02 February 2006

great poem, with a good flow and a pleasant and enjoyable content! well done! HBH

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Graham Jones 31 January 2006

Very good Bridgid, I love the sort of stacato speed of it, it has pace and flow, and would raise a smile anywhere Regards Graham.

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Jerry Hughes 22 December 2005

News to me, Bridgid. Isn't Maggie Thatcher still alive? Cheers anyway, Jerry

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Ernestine Northover 08 November 2005

I like this Bridgid, it's got a lot going for it, takes me back to my childhood reading matter. Sincerely Ernestine

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