Monday, December 18, 2006

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Rating: 5.0

Sleazy smoke surrounds my eyes
Imaginations ink still tries
To mar my mind with mystic magic
And lynch my life with lies so tragic.
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Charlie Annalls
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Danny Reynolds 18 December 2006

Nice tempo, rhythm and rhyme, Charlie. Could I almost hear Grace Slick in the soundtrack? Danny

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