Sunday, February 28, 2010

Alibi Comments

Rating: 5.0

I found a shelter
Near the trench
The trench of oblivion
I wore a mask
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Abhinav Baruah
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Ernest Hazvi Maengamhuru 30 September 2011

I admire your style; calm and appealing!

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Allemagne Roßmann 26 August 2011

Very good write.....nice expressions

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shakequill usher 22 March 2010

safety and ease comes under the truth without the shadowy alibi in your life.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 09 March 2010

Yeah it’s a great poetic Alibi … byed byed it…and very nicely...thanks for sharing …. 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 March 2010

I found a shelter Near the trench The trench of oblivion I wore a mask And gazed for light During dawn and dus......it is good to find refuge under the cover of alibi to find an answer.. lovely poem to be crafted in fine words...10 read mine ////smile...ideal couplel

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Respite is a rich, refreshing river that rewards those who search and find it. Well done my friend.

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Chitra - 03 March 2010

the true alibi...of finding solace and comfort and not masking it with vims and fancies...a profound message in these lines.

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