Sunday, July 26, 2009

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Love is carried as a burden
As a load tied around your back
You expect your lover to carry your load
And trip in all your cracks.
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Mehreen Mujeeb
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Sarwar Chowdhury 09 August 2009

Lovely verses that emitting logical thoughts! 10+

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Catrina Heart 26 July 2009

If love is to feel Then why do we expect? Nice provokative verse...well implied theme..Thanks!

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Mehreen Mujeeb

Mehreen Mujeeb

Lahore, Pakistan
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