Friday, January 3, 2003

Alfred Moir Comments

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Why was I not devoured by self-contempt,
And rotted down by indifference
And impotent revolt like Indignation Jones?
Why, with all of my errant steps
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Edgar Lee Masters
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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 December 2017

THE FIRST PART: because they cannot be posted in ONE WHOLE, so I have divided inti THREE PARTS: My CONGRATS to the Family of the Classic Poet. Such a greatest JOY to read this very intelligent poem of The DAY. Full of metaphors and bit irony. It is here an obvious fact that the poet was not addicted to alcohol,

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 December 2017

THE SECOND PART: as he declared himself as dry and clean BUT he made hints to the present famous persons in society at his time. All I know is that the poet loved a very lot reading books that he described in the last FIVE lines. I must admit that I had to read this poem at the least twice. Perhaps thrice.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 December 2017

THE LAST PART: A very enjoyable Classic poem with tints of light irony. With the very best wishes, a TEN for this entertaining poem, sincerely Sylvia Frances Chan AD Saturday 9 Dec 2017 at 1.35 hrs. AM West European Time.

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 December 2017

Fall on me! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Glen Kappy 08 December 2017

From the Spoon River Anthology I'm guessing, the above poem by itself loses something without knowing who the other people are the speaker refers to. I like how straightforward it is and the descriptive language—devoured and rotted great verbs in their contexts, and impotent and errant great adjectives in theirs. What was the book? I'd like to know. And the closing four lines are mysteries that I share which bring to my mind the idea of destiny. GK

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We all have so many whys in our life. The questions and a hint of regret most elegantly worded in this poem. But why did I go to Mason City, Where I chanced to see the book in a window, With its garish cover luring my eye? And why did my soul respond to the book, As I read it over and over?

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Resh Kav 19 June 2017

Beautiful. Thank you for sharing this

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 June 2017

Such an interesting poem posted here... Many thanks...👍👍👍

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