Tuesday, April 11, 2023

Alexandrine - Togetherness Comments

Rating: 5.0

My affection is as unadulterated as nectar,
crafted from handpicked blossoms.
A collaborative effort of bees,
alleviating the pains of my existence:
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M. Asim Nehal
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 13 April 2023

Eloquent. Liked your piece

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Nabakishore Dash 12 April 2023

Extremely well crafted.At least you have got some thing unadulterated in this age when adulteration is at its zenith.

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Nabakishore Dash 12 April 2023

Extremely well written Dr Nehal.At least you cou

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 11 April 2023

Wonderful Asim Wonderful

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Rajan T Renganathan 11 April 2023

Outstanding poem on togetherness and I just read the translation done by Deepak which is equally fantastic. Class ****

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Beautifully penned, direct from the heart…

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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