Saturday, February 23, 2019

Alexandrine - Love And Relationships Comments

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My love is unparallel, nothing can be compared to it
A work in tandem by bees, taking the sorrows of my life:
Some buried petals of the past mixed with the fragrance of presence,
weaving the relationships; by the threads of words.
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M. Asim Nehal
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ome buried petals of the past mixed with the fragrance of presence, weaving the relationships; by the threads of words.

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Michael Jack 12 July 2020

They r inseparable and follow one after another like day and night.

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Suzon Albert 25 February 2019

Love is interestingly positioned in your poem.

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Gordon Walter 23 February 2019

Wonderful poem, my friend.

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Juhaina Tumlu 23 February 2019

Awesome, Some buried petals of the past mixed with the fragrance of presence, weaving the relationships; by the threads of words.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 February 2019

Pure love motivates mind and pure love sings the joyous moments of life. Pure love carries pure love. This is an excellent poem.10

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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