Wednesday, November 23, 2005

Alex Stole My Last Line Comments

Rating: 5.0

Prisoner walking to the end of his time
In the execution room, point of no return
Noose dangling in view
Waiting for its sole purpose
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Veronika Knollman
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Kee Thampi 13 September 2006

Lifeless eyes gaze on creeping death And the faceless man is dropped from the living world in a great lucid way you made entrended commotions

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Cj Heck 23 November 2005

Excellent, Veronika! Your first line is an attention-grabber, it held me through to the vivid last line. Again, excellent! Warmest regards and respect, CJ

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