Wednesday, November 23, 2005
Alex Stole My Last Line Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Prisoner walking to the end of his time
In the execution room, point of no return
Noose dangling in view
Waiting for its sole purpose
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Cj Heck
23 November 2005
Excellent, Veronika! Your first line is an attention-grabber, it held me through to the vivid last line. Again, excellent! Warmest regards and respect, CJ
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