Tuesday, September 9, 2008

Alcoholic Blues Comments

Rating: 2.8

You're an alcoholic but not a smoker -
What else is there to say?
Your poetry is mediocre -
It's been another lousy day.
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John Thorkild Ellison
COMMENTS
Brian Jani 26 May 2014

Your poetry is exeptional well done

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The Former Badjist 20 September 2008

Impressive. Complex emotions expressed in a disciplined form whilst under considerable stress. I raise a glass to you, psychocartographer!

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Kathleen West 09 September 2008

Even in the alcoholic blues state you haven't lost your humor! At least your not numb! Good write and good luck.

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