Monday, October 8, 2007

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He's got her finally in his grasp.
He smiles in silent contentment.
She loved him at first sight - lost her appetite.
Now her flesh sags - lost between her bones.
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Joe Hughes
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Brian Jani 26 May 2014

Mr hughes I'm a fan of your poetry

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Brian Jani 26 May 2014

Mr hughes I'm a fan of your poetry

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Stevie Taite 19 November 2012

This has left me speechless! Some amazing lines in this poem... Fed each child ignoring moment.....He had redecorated all her flesh! This poem had astounding depth and I am blown away!

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Jennifer K 02 July 2010

you write beautifully. eloquent and melancholy. i adore your imagery here.

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Ruth Walters 28 December 2009

Very poignant, so very sad.....so tragic... Ruthie

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Joe Hughes

Joe Hughes

Drogheda, Ireland
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