Monday, December 11, 2017

Alchemy Comments

Rating: 3.5

Listen to the wind
singing for her,
the beauty of her eyes
praising with every blow,
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Kostas Lagos
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Luz Hanaii 28 May 2019

You learn something every day. The word you used here, " pulchritude" (beauty) in Spanish we have a word " pulcritud" but it mean clean, proper. Nice poem, well described beautiful lady. She sounds like me, lol. Just kidding!

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Kostas Lagos 28 May 2019

Thank you Luz! I'm sure that you match the description indeed.

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Rini Shibu 11 December 2017

Lovely poem about a queen of beauty.. Well penned

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Kostas Lagos 11 December 2017

Thank youdear Rini!

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