Friday, January 13, 2006
Albert Potter Is Not Dead! Comments
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Albert Potter isn't dead
It were just a bloody lie
In fact, apart from athlete's foot
he's as fit as you or I
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Gina Onyemaechi
13 January 2006
Pure comedy, Bill. But I'd enjoy it even more if lines 5-9 followed the rhyme scheme used in the othe parts of the poem. Tweak it, will you?
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7/20/2025 2:11:12 PM # 1.0.0
I'm clapping my hands Bill. what a fun poem, and again a lovely character to go in it. This is going to my Favourites. Love Ernestine XXX