Alas Alone Am I Comments

you have your great ideas with you..yours and dreams behind.thats why you never can be alone..thats why your poems, like this one has meaningful effects..you write from heart..and target hearts..impressive way of writing

Well expressed.I really enjoyed.I loved this last line 'Dawn will come, I will walk in thy meadows.'It gives hopeful and shows loneliness too.Great work.

The last punch line gave a new hope to the feelings of despair. Merging with the shadows and walking in the meadows is a dream-like state of loneliness, which is the destiny of every sensitive being. Good poem, Rani. Dawn will come and you will walk in the meadows. Naseer