Alarmed Comments

An intriguing poem; I like the point you're making, but it doesn't demonstrate love or forgiveness to those that hurt Jews. In a war, one can't be neutral and expect change without heartfelt involvement or action.

Yes. It is a war, a so-called holy war, not unlike the crusades in times past. I liked your sensible take on it, not at all like what I have written. I tend to 'lost it' when I get into the whole thing. Good. Very good wordage.