Alarm Comments

deep my friend, very good poem, i enjoyed the flow quite a bit and the reference to abu grahib. Awesome job

'wearing each other like custom made garments' I agree with Frank. This line stands out to me. It's a very succinct version of what I and Better Half were saying to each other earlier on. :) Memorable. t x

great simile...like garment..and smooth flow alarmed at the end... impressive composition....

'''Wearing each other, like custom made garments''' Sound the ALARM! Its getting a might Hot, in Pakistan, this morning! Rock Solid, my friend! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

when desire hold out like toddler’s scuffing feet to school... desire is desirte isn't it?

Hmm.. interesting thoughts transcribed! HG: -) xx