Saturday, August 18, 2018

Alankar(Decor) -248 - Dedicated To Dr Dillip K Swain Comments

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King stanza is like a right angled triangle (L shaped and right hand invisible) :
This is a new innovation of poetic stanza by Dr.Dillip K Swain: No syllable counts:
Three words vertical and three to five words horizontal (Rhyming words are only presented vertically)
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Indira Renganathan
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Your specimens of King Stanza gives the new meter (May I call so) King Stanza a new light and brightness. Thank You indiraji

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Richard Wlodarski 14 March 2022

Fascinating. A well crafted poem, Indira. Very ingenious, Dillip. Now, I really have my work cut out for me. Hope I don't forget how it works.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 August 2018

Out of your sample 10 stanzas, I liked Stanza (8) and Stanza (9) most! However, all other stanzas are O.K. Thanks dear madam for your successful experimentation! Stay always blessed! Best regards

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 August 2018

The most significant aspect of the stanza lies at the bottom line with a delicate and precise message to the audience! The vertical rhyming words are just to create a rhythm in synchronization with the message yielding line! (Part III)

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 August 2018

I was asked why the nomenclature is so! The word ‘King’ is used thoughtfully with two key things taken into consideration. First, the brevity of expression should be like the voice of a king. Second, anyone can use the stanza in general as it is not named after me. (Part II)

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 August 2018

From the very outset, I express my sincere thanks to you for putting my newly developed 'King Stanza' in its right perspective so meticulously demonstrated through your Alankar(Decor) -248 with some examples to follow suit! This poetic stanza seems so simple but it has a powerful impact if perceived correctly! (Part 1)

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