Monday, June 26, 2006

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As you lay there dieing
I sit hear crying,
Wishing I could do something,
Knowing there is nothing
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lilly mandrell
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Vinod Kumar 01 April 2009

nice poem touching and contemporarly important one, thanks for sharing 10+

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Micheal Udenyi 03 August 2007

very nice though pathetic.great job keep it up.

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