Alan's Blues Comments

Myra Wow I like this poem nicely penned

I enjoyed this view of life from the male perspective, interesting ending, makes the reader wonder what if anything Alan may do or say, I liked the order of the poem and the way it changes rythm.

These are some blues, all right! This is a fine view of the harried male's side of the domestic fence... I love: 'All she did all day was help some hamburger'! The frustration is palpable... Well done, Myra. : ]