Al3+ + So42- -> Al2(So4) 3 (I Wrote You This Song...) Comments

Wonderful, especially at 5am.

Anies... what can I say apart from this was brilliant! this song of yours goes straight into my favourites.. Keep posting and I'll keep reading. (I see you are good in chemistry too apart from Poems :) Keep it up!) HBH

The way you start every stanza with 'I wrote you this song' and then riff off in a different way each time, makes your poem haunting and beautiful. I'm astounded by the proficiency of some of your lines, too!

This is so touching. Gurl, you have a way with words and you really can express feelings. I wish i could write just like you. You are a real poet.