Monday, October 15, 2018

Al, My Pal …[ Friendship; Homelessness; Luck: Good & Bad ] Comments

Rating: 5.0

Yes, Al was my pal, and much more than that.
I met him when he was ‘down & out', busted flat,
wearing a shabby coat, homeless, and just TOO slim!
I could relate to that, as I'd been about like him.
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Bri Edwards
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Kim Barney 04 May 2023

I was going to ask if there was any truth to this, but then I read the poet's note. Very engaging. Once you start reading, it's hard to stop.

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Bri Edwards 04 May 2023

Thanks, Pal. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 04 May 2023

A high school friend sent me three poems 'written by' Artificial Intelligence, in the styles of William Shakespeare, Ogden Nash, and me, Bri Edwards. Believe me. ;)

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Bri Edwards 04 May 2023

Today I'm editing the last line to have space before 'Poor'. It's about time! ! ! : ) bri NOW 'AI' REFERS to Artificial Intelligence for most people.

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Hazel Durham 17 October 2018

An inspirational and thought provoking write so beautifully written and the twist at the end, brilliant!

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Akhtar Jawad 17 October 2018

A touching poem, much have been inked in it, homelessness, good and bad luck and finally the friendship.

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Kostas Lagos 15 October 2018

! You almost made me cry with this one! 10 and more!

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