Monday, December 21, 2009
Al Jabbaro Comments
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Your eyes lock in
I loose control
The world just passes by.
Your presence grips a hold of me
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7/23/2025 6:04:21 PM # 1.0.0
I like this Charlotte although the meter is a bit off the words have a good flow to them and your narration through the emotions in the poem are first rate, I give it a big thumbs up and a definate ten.