~ Al Fresco Imagery ~ Comments

What and whose 'truth and freedom' that should 'reign supreme over what is left of the land? ' And, pray tell, what is 'holy basil'? The poem seems to ramble over much terrain so that although one would hope to glean from it, one does get lost. Adeline

Nice, snappy poem assisted by alliteration and rhythms contrasting with traditional, contemplation evoking subject matter. nice poem.

Don't we go beyond all reality and live in that soul sanctuary.

Nice. Thanks for sharing.

The title of the poem draws the reader in and this finely penned poem holds the reader a willing captive to the very last line. A lovely smooth flow to this well expressed poem! Tfs.............

Nice inv we need icons of beauty so as to go beyond.

Nice You reached the other world indeed..., beyond Al Fresco

So much beauty in so few words. This is a very evocative work. Lovely, indeed.

Dear poet, Thank you so much for giving this concise but meaningful advice to the readers and making easy for poets like us to convey our message to them

Lovely write, it's short but long on thought. The words float but, also serves purpose just like a painting. It does make one search the soul. I enjoyed so much.

Very nice. Rather simple on the surface, but subtle deeper aim. I like it very well.

A real hard look at the inner workings of self, is essential. As they say charity begins at home. Nice poetry thanks for sharing

A lovely and deep write fascinating me as a reader ...many thanks for sharing...Mari

Very expressive! I love your use of many different languages in your poetry, it is very literate! I love the line 'Get lost in soul sanctuary' It is very profound! Thanks so much for sharing... Marina Gasbey...

Celestial message/painting/etching/engraving/sculpting…very economic in words but extended easel with all colors…fantastic…true/tuned vibe caught… 10++ dr.sakti

Shortl, but powerful words of expression.

A small portal glimpse of a true poet's heart. Get lost in Soul sanctuary... Wonderful insight you have, a rare treasure! ; D

Inner Beauty where everything is stored like musk deer we’re oblivious of… Here Poet Nivedita nicely painted [reminded also] that beauty and makes a commendable/acceptable-to-all prescription to free from drudgery of what we’re eaten-up…nice concept thanks Ma’am 10++

Wow! Painting of words noetically…from in-built deep sanctuary of abode [soul] by all the innate finery of imagination…fantastic write Niv…congrats 10++

very succinct. finding the true power of ones inner self. nicely done